KV-1 tank comments please

r010039b

Hello my name is Marcus

This is my moudle of the KV-1 tank, could you please comment on what is wrong and what i could have improve on.

This is my 1st year and would like to know what i can do to get better.

Any Comments will do thank you

r010039b

bump

Kyuzo

aww.... mate... i dont want to hurt you, but.. create some small props, learn how to texture, how to create detailed high poly and how to create lowpoly that will properly hold all details, and then come back to this... "tank"

start from here: https://wiki.polycount.com/
or maybe here: https://wiki.polycount.com/CategoryPropsModeling

4evra

well i cant really see the actual modeling part,the material and those 'scratches' or whatever it is is just too 'noisy'.
Post clay render of the tank?

Vincent_DEROZIER

Hello Marcus,
Before work on your Uvs, Textures or Props environnement you have to fix all the issues you have on your Tank. As 4evra said, post only your tank with a clay material and the the same screen with the wireframe and we will be able to help you.
For the moment I can see that you've got issue on your smoothing groups, and proportion. You've got missing faces too.

nick2730

I agree with everyone else, great effort but start very small to get the basics down before moving to something bigger

r010039b

ok thank you kyuzo

r010039b

I can me a detailed tank just don't understand how to add it to a low polly

r010039b

BTW this is my high polly the resent pictures

dpadam450

I don't think it's the proportions, I think his camera FOV is just too low. Try FOV between 65 and 90