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diff --git a/packs/equipment-effects/effect-soulspark-candle.json b/packs/equipment-effects/effect-soulspark-candle.json
@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@
  "name": "Effect: Soulspark Candle",
  "system": {
  "description": {
- "value": "<p>Worshippers of Pharasma gain a +3 status bonus to attack rolls, skill checks, saving throws, and Perception checks. Undead creatures and worshippers of Urgathoa within this area take a –3 status penalty to those checks..</p>"
+ "value": "<p>Worshippers of Pharasma gain a +3 status bonus to attack rolls, skill checks, saving throws, and Perception checks. Undead creatures and worshippers of Urgathoa within this area take a –3 status penalty to those checks.</p>"
  },
  "duration": {
  "expiry": "turn-start",

diff --git a/packs/pathfinder-bestiary-2/brine-dragon-ancient-spellcaster.json b/packs/pathfinder-bestiary-2/brine-dragon-ancient-spellcaster.json
@@ -2866,7 +2866,7 @@
  },
  "category": "offensive",
  "description": {
- "value": "<p>The dragon tries to capsize an adjacent aquatic vessel of their size or smaller. They must succeed at an Athletics check with a DC of 35 (reduced by 5 for each size smaller the vessel is than the turtle) or the pilot's Sailing Lore DC, whichever is higher.</p>"
+ "value": "<p>The dragon tries to capsize an adjacent aquatic vessel of their size or smaller. They must succeed at an Athletics check with a DC of 35 (reduced by 5 for each size smaller the vessel is than the dragon) or the pilot's Sailing Lore DC, whichever is higher.</p>"
  },
  "publication": {
  "license": "OGL",

diff --git a/packs/pathfinder-bestiary-2/brine-dragon-ancient.json b/packs/pathfinder-bestiary-2/brine-dragon-ancient.json
@@ -776,7 +776,7 @@
  },
  "category": "offensive",
  "description": {
- "value": "<p>The dragon tries to capsize an adjacent aquatic vessel of their size or smaller. They must succeed at an Athletics check with a DC of 35 (reduced by 5 for each size smaller the vessel is than the turtle) or the pilot's Sailing Lore DC, whichever is higher.</p>"
+ "value": "<p>The dragon tries to capsize an adjacent aquatic vessel of their size or smaller. They must succeed at an Athletics check with a DC of 35 (reduced by 5 for each size smaller the vessel is than the dragon) or the pilot's Sailing Lore DC, whichever is higher.</p>"
  },
  "publication": {
  "license": "OGL",

diff --git a/packs/pathfinder-bestiary-2/coil-spy.json b/packs/pathfinder-bestiary-2/coil-spy.json
@@ -626,7 +626,7 @@
  "containerId": null,
  "damage": null,
  "description": {
- "value": "<p>This venom erodes its target's defenses, aiding the spider in securing prey.</p>\n<hr />\n<p><strong>Activate</strong> <span class=\"action-glyph\">2</span> Interact (Injury)</p>\n<p><strong>Saving Throw</strong> DC 21 Fortitude</p>\n<p><strong>Maximum Duration</strong> 6 rounds</p>\n<p><strong>Stage 1</strong> @Damage[1d10[poison]] damage and @UUID[Compendium.pf2e.conditionitems.Item.Off-Guard] (1 round)</p>\n<p><strong>Stage 2</strong> @Damage[1d12[poison]] damage, @UUID[Compendium.pf2e.conditionitems.Item.Clumsy]{Clumsy 1}, and off-guard (1 round)</p>\n<p><strong>Stage 3</strong> @Damage[2d6[poison]] damage, @UUID[Compendium.pf2e.conditionitems.Item.Clumsy]{Clumsy 2}, and off-guard (1 round)</p>"
+ "value": "<p>This venom erodes its target's defenses, aiding the spider in securing prey.</p>\n<hr />\n<p><strong>Activate</strong> <span class=\"action-glyph\">2</span> Interact (Injury)</p>\n<p><strong>Saving Throw</strong> @Check[type:fortitude|dc:21]</p>\n<p><strong>Maximum Duration</strong> 6 rounds</p>\n<p><strong>Stage 1</strong> @Damage[1d10[poison]] damage and @UUID[Compendium.pf2e.conditionitems.Item.Off-Guard] (1 round)</p>\n<p><strong>Stage 2</strong> @Damage[1d12[poison]] damage, @UUID[Compendium.pf2e.conditionitems.Item.Clumsy]{Clumsy 1}, and off-guard (1 round)</p>\n<p><strong>Stage 3</strong> @Damage[2d6[poison]] damage, @UUID[Compendium.pf2e.conditionitems.Item.Clumsy]{Clumsy 2}, and off-guard (1 round)</p>"
  },
  "equipped": {
  "carryType": "worn",

diff --git a/packs/pathfinder-bestiary-2/emperor-cobra.json b/packs/pathfinder-bestiary-2/emperor-cobra.json
@@ -62,7 +62,7 @@
  },
  "category": "offensive",
  "description": {
- "value": "<p><strong>Saving Throw</strong> @Check[type:fortitude|dc:22] ,</p>\n<p><strong>Maximum Duration</strong> 6 rounds</p>\n<p><strong>Stage 1</strong> @Damage[1d8[poison]] damage (1 round)</p>\n<p><strong>Stage 2</strong> @Damage[1d8[poison]] damage and @UUID[Compendium.pf2e.conditionitems.Item.Drained]{Drained 1} (1 round)</p>\n<p><strong>Stage 3</strong> @Damage[2d6[poison]] damage and @UUID[Compendium.pf2e.conditionitems.Item.Drained]{Drained 2} (1 round)</p>"
+ "value": "<p><strong>Saving Throw</strong> @Check[type:fortitude|dc:22]</p>\n<p><strong>Maximum Duration</strong> 6 rounds</p>\n<p><strong>Stage 1</strong> @Damage[1d8[poison]] damage (1 round)</p>\n<p><strong>Stage 2</strong> @Damage[1d8[poison]] damage and @UUID[Compendium.pf2e.conditionitems.Item.Drained]{Drained 1} (1 round)</p>\n<p><strong>Stage 3</strong> @Damage[2d6[poison]] damage and @UUID[Compendium.pf2e.conditionitems.Item.Drained]{Drained 2} (1 round)</p>"
  },
  "publication": {
  "license": "OGL",

diff --git a/packs/pathfinder-bestiary-2/green-dracolisk.json b/packs/pathfinder-bestiary-2/green-dracolisk.json
@@ -199,7 +199,7 @@
  },
  "category": "offensive",
  "description": {
- "value": "<p>The dracolisk breathes a gout of energy based on its draconic heritage, as noted below. This breath weapon deals @Damage[6d10[poison]] damage, with a @Check[type:fortitude|dc:28|basic:true] save.</p>\n<p>The dracolisk can't use Breath Weapon again for [[/br 1d4 #Recharge Breath Weapon]]{1d4 rounds}.</p>\n<hr />\n<p><strong>Black</strong> @Template[type:cone|distance:30] of poison</p>"
+ "value": "<p>The dracolisk breathes a gout of energy based on its draconic heritage, as noted below. This breath weapon deals @Damage[6d10[poison]] damage, with a @Check[type:fortitude|dc:28|basic:true] save.</p>\n<p>The dracolisk can't use Breath Weapon again for [[/br 1d4 #Recharge Breath Weapon]]{1d4 rounds}.</p>\n<hr />\n<p><strong>Green</strong> @Template[type:cone|distance:30] of poison</p>"
  },
  "publication": {
  "license": "OGL",

diff --git a/packs/pathfinder-bestiary-2/ice-yai.json b/packs/pathfinder-bestiary-2/ice-yai.json
@@ -868,7 +868,7 @@
  },
  "category": "offensive",
  "description": {
- "value": "<p>The frost yai takes on the appearance of a @UUID[Compendium.pf2e.pathfinder-bestiary.Actor.Frost Giant]. This doesn't change their Speed or Strike attack and damage.</p>\n<hr />\n<p>@Localize[PF2E.NPC.Abilities.Glossary.ChangeShape]</p>"
+ "value": "<p>The ice yai takes on the appearance of a @UUID[Compendium.pf2e.pathfinder-bestiary.Actor.Frost Giant]. This doesn't change their Speed or Strike attack and damage.</p>\n<hr />\n<p>@Localize[PF2E.NPC.Abilities.Glossary.ChangeShape]</p>"
  },
  "publication": {
  "license": "OGL",

diff --git a/packs/pathfinder-bestiary-2/interlocutor.json b/packs/pathfinder-bestiary-2/interlocutor.json
@@ -955,7 +955,7 @@
  {
  "key": "FlatModifier",
  "predicate": [
- "scuplt-flesh"
+ "sculpt-flesh"
  ],
  "selector": "crafting",
  "value": 2
@@ -964,8 +964,8 @@
  "slug": null,
  "variants": {
  "0": {
- "label": "+24 scuplting flesh",
- "options": "scuplt-flesh"
+ "label": "+24 sculpting flesh",
+ "options": "sculpt-flesh"
  }
  }
  },

diff --git a/packs/pathfinder-bestiary-2/magma-scorpion.json b/packs/pathfinder-bestiary-2/magma-scorpion.json
@@ -198,7 +198,7 @@
  },
  "category": "offensive",
  "description": {
- "value": "<p><strong>Saving Throw</strong> @Check[type:fortitude|dc:26]</p>\n<p><strong>Maximum Duration</strong> 6 rounds</p>\n<p><strong>Stage 1</strong> @Damage[2d6[fire]] damage and @UUID[Compendium.pf2e.conditionitems.Item.Enfeebled]{Enfeebled 1} (1 round)</p>\n<p><strong>Stage 2</strong> @Damage[3d6[fire]] damage and @UUID[Compendium.pf2e.conditionitems.Item.Enfeebled]{Enfeebled 2}</p>"
+ "value": "<p><strong>Saving Throw</strong> @Check[type:fortitude|dc:26]</p>\n<p><strong>Maximum Duration</strong> 6 rounds</p>\n<p><strong>Stage 1</strong> @Damage[2d6[fire]] damage and @UUID[Compendium.pf2e.conditionitems.Item.Enfeebled]{Enfeebled 1} (1 round)</p>\n<p><strong>Stage 2</strong> @Damage[3d6[fire]] damage and @UUID[Compendium.pf2e.conditionitems.Item.Enfeebled]{Enfeebled 2} (1 round)</p>"
  },
  "publication": {
  "license": "OGL",

diff --git a/packs/pathfinder-bestiary-2/planetar.json b/packs/pathfinder-bestiary-2/planetar.json
@@ -1620,71 +1620,6 @@
  },
  "type": "spell"
  },
- {
- "_id": "yniZCJzh538SdgOX",
- "flags": {
- "core": {
- "sourceId": "Compendium.pf2e.spells-srd.Item.joEruBVz31Uxczzq"
- }
- },
- "img": "systems/pf2e/icons/spells/angelic-messenger.webp",
- "name": "Angelic Messenger",
- "sort": 2500000,
- "system": {
- "area": null,
- "cost": {
- "value": ""
- },
- "counteraction": false,
- "damage": {},
- "defense": null,
- "description": {
- "value": "<p>You transport yourself to either a celestial plane or a world on the Material Plane where worshippers of your patron can be found. You must be of no higher level than double <em>angelic messenger's</em> spell rank</p>\n<hr />\n<p><strong>Critical Success</strong> As success, but if you've never visited that plane or world before, you appear right in front of the message's intended recipient.</p>\n<p><strong>Success</strong> You arrive on the target plane or world at the last location you visited on that plane or world, or to a random location within 10d10 miles of your message's intended recipient if you've never visited that plane or world before.</p>\n<p><strong>Failure</strong> You don't travel.</p>\n<p><strong>Critical Failure</strong> You accidentally travel to the wrong plane, possibly a dangerous plane.</p>"
- },
- "duration": {
- "sustained": false,
- "value": ""
- },
- "level": {
- "value": 1
- },
- "location": {
- "value": null
- },
- "publication": {
- "license": "OGL",
- "remaster": false,
- "title": ""
- },
- "range": {
- "value": ""
- },
- "requirements": "",
- "ritual": {
- "primary": {
- "check": "Religion (expert; you must be an angel)"
- },
- "secondary": {
- "casters": 0,
- "checks": ""
- }
- },
- "rules": [],
- "slug": "angelic-messenger",
- "target": {
- "value": ""
- },
- "time": {
- "value": "1 day"
- },
- "traits": {
- "rarity": "uncommon",
- "traditions": [],
- "value": []
- }
- },
- "type": "spell"
- },
  {
  "_id": "JmDgxqqc3eNEkSE7",
  "flags": {
@@ -1694,7 +1629,7 @@
  },
  "img": "icons/magic/life/cross-worn-green.webp",
  "name": "Heal",
- "sort": 2600000,
+ "sort": 2500000,
  "system": {
  "area": null,
  "cost": {
@@ -1893,7 +1828,7 @@
  },
  "img": "icons/weapons/swords/greatsword-crossguard-silver.webp",
  "name": "Greatsword",
- "sort": 2700000,
+ "sort": 2600000,
  "system": {
  "baseItem": "greatsword",
  "bonus": {
@@ -1980,7 +1915,7 @@
  },
  "img": "systems/pf2e/icons/default-icons/melee.svg",
  "name": "Holy Greatsword",
- "sort": 2800000,
+ "sort": 2700000,
  "system": {
  "attack": {
  "value": ""
@@ -2031,7 +1966,7 @@
  },
  "img": "systems/pf2e/icons/actions/Passive.webp",
  "name": "Constant Spells",
- "sort": 2900000,
+ "sort": 2800000,
  "system": {
  "actionType": {
  "value": "passive"
@@ -2061,7 +1996,7 @@
  "_id": "gKujbrE9tdbREcZi",
  "img": "systems/pf2e/icons/actions/Passive.webp",
  "name": "+1 Status to All Saves vs. Magic",
- "sort": 3000000,
+ "sort": 2900000,
  "system": {
  "actionType": {
  "value": "passive"
@@ -2114,7 +2049,7 @@
  },
  "img": "systems/pf2e/icons/actions/Passive.webp",
  "name": "Regeneration 15 (Deactivated by Unholy)",
- "sort": 3100000,
+ "sort": 3000000,
  "system": {
  "actionType": {
  "value": "passive"
@@ -2154,7 +2089,7 @@
  "_id": "BsKlvqGTEEIQo1cx",
  "img": "systems/pf2e/icons/actions/Passive.webp",
  "name": "+4 Bonus on Perception to Detect Illusions",
- "sort": 3200000,
+ "sort": 3100000,
  "system": {
  "actionType": {
  "value": "passive"
@@ -2193,7 +2128,7 @@
  "_id": "EIhaPhUMiN88cQT6",
  "img": "systems/pf2e/icons/actions/Passive.webp",
  "name": "Aura of Righteousness",
- "sort": 3300000,
+ "sort": 3200000,
  "system": {
  "actionType": {
  "value": "passive"
@@ -2245,7 +2180,7 @@
  "_id": "Q57wXsK3JdmLYoDR",
  "img": "systems/pf2e/icons/actions/TwoActions.webp",
  "name": "Blade of Justice",
- "sort": 3400000,
+ "sort": 3300000,
  "system": {
  "actionType": {
  "value": "action"
@@ -2297,7 +2232,7 @@
  },
  "img": "systems/pf2e/icons/actions/OneAction.webp",
  "name": "Change Shape",
- "sort": 3500000,
+ "sort": 3400000,
  "system": {
  "actionType": {
  "value": "action"
@@ -2331,7 +2266,7 @@
  "_id": "XSN5GyOi1NAbLqve",
  "img": "systems/pf2e/icons/actions/Passive.webp",
  "name": "Holy Armaments",
- "sort": 3600000,
+ "sort": 3500000,
  "system": {
  "actionType": {
  "value": "passive"
@@ -2375,7 +2310,7 @@
  "_id": "BC4ipmpDwp3kT9He",
  "img": "systems/pf2e/icons/default-icons/lore.svg",
  "name": "Athletics",
- "sort": 3700000,
+ "sort": 3600000,
  "system": {
  "description": {
  "value": ""
@@ -2400,7 +2335,7 @@
  "_id": "9BLjUK7MunVti6KO",
  "img": "systems/pf2e/icons/default-icons/lore.svg",
  "name": "Intimidation",
- "sort": 3800000,
+ "sort": 3700000,
  "system": {
  "description": {
  "value": ""
@@ -2425,7 +2360,7 @@
  "_id": "y44BjptmN8n3p7i3",
  "img": "systems/pf2e/icons/default-icons/lore.svg",
  "name": "Religion",
- "sort": 3900000,
+ "sort": 3800000,
  "system": {
  "description": {
  "value": ""

diff --git a/packs/pathfinder-bestiary-2/sunflower-leshy.json b/packs/pathfinder-bestiary-2/sunflower-leshy.json
@@ -276,7 +276,7 @@
  },
  "category": "offensive",
  "description": {
- "value": "<p>20 feet. <strong>Requirements</strong> The sunflower leshy begins its turn in an area of bright light</p>\n<hr />\n<p><strong>Effect</strong> The sunflower leshy reflects the sun or another source of bright light from their face. Each creature that ends its turn in the emanation must attempt a @Check[type:will|dc:16] save.</p>\n<hr />\n<p><strong>Success</strong> The creature is unaffected and is temporarily immune to heliotrope for 24 hours.</p>\n<p><strong>Failure</strong> The creature is distracted by the light, becoming @UUID[Compendium.pf2e.conditionitems.Item.Off-Guard] for 1 round.</p>\n<p><strong>Critical Failure</strong> As failure, but the creature is also @UUID[Compendium.pf2e.conditionitems.Item.Dazzled] for 1 round.</p>"
+ "value": "<p>20 feet.</p>\n<p><strong>Requirements</strong> The sunflower leshy begins its turn in an area of bright light</p>\n<hr />\n<p><strong>Effect</strong> The sunflower leshy reflects the sun or another source of bright light from their face. Each creature that ends its turn in the emanation must attempt a @Check[type:will|dc:16] save.</p>\n<hr />\n<p><strong>Success</strong> The creature is unaffected and is temporarily immune to heliotrope for 24 hours.</p>\n<p><strong>Failure</strong> The creature is distracted by the light, becoming @UUID[Compendium.pf2e.conditionitems.Item.Off-Guard] for 1 round.</p>\n<p><strong>Critical Failure</strong> As failure, but the creature is also @UUID[Compendium.pf2e.conditionitems.Item.Dazzled] for 1 round.</p>"
  },
  "publication": {
  "license": "OGL",