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By accessing the Mastodon database directly the administrators of your server, and any recipient’s servers, can read your messages.
->The administrators of your server and any receiving servers can theoretically read your posts by directly accessing their Mastodon server's database.
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agreed that this is a better phrasing (and avoids starting a sentence with a preposition "By", which is grammatically fine, but I personally would try to avoid in technical writing)
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I agree that this phrasing is more direct, honest and doesn't cause as much fear as the previous phrasing does.