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@@ -15,7 +15,7 @@ <h2>Our goal is to amplify the Commuter voice.</h2>
 
  <p>Commuters Globally & SA in particular, are impacted by an alarming rate of accidents, caused by belligerent behavior (i.e. reckless, distracted & intoxicated driving, underage drivers etc) consequently causing fatalities on their daily commute to school, work or enroute to destinations of leisure, which pose a significant threat to transport safety & communities. Looking specifically South Africa, a significant burden placed on the SA economy 3.29% GDP, valued at approximately R198 Billion (2021/22) in an Economy that grew by 1.9% in 2022.<br>
  <h2>The Toot-way</h2>
- Our proposal, forms part of an open-access digital transport-management solution, where a community of users use technology to <strong>"Toot"</strong> wreckless drivers out, mitigating behavior-related incidents, before they become bigger consequences of frustrations, like road-rage, accidents & worst-case, fatalities incurred on our roads. 
+ Our proposal, forms part of an open-access digital transport-management solution, where a community of users use technology to <strong>"Toot"</strong> out wreckless behaviors, vehicles etx mitigating behavior-related incidents, before they become bigger consequences of frustrations, like road-rage, accidents & worst-case, fatalities incurred on our roads. 
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  Our Software that will be the intermediary agency between the following market participants/users:<br> 
  <strong>Commuters:</strong><li> Private vehicle owners, (Motorised & Non-motorised), Cyclers, tourists, students, public transport, disabled persons (physical & hearing), elderly persons</li><br>