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Grammatically updated the DiscordGo docs #979

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@JCorcho JCorcho commented Jul 29, 2021

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Cleaned up grammatical issues found within DiscordGo's different .md files

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The commit message is misspelled, too. 😛

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additional voice helper functions and features for DiscordGo.

* See [dca](https://github.com/bwmarrin/dca) for an **experimental** stand alone
tool that wraps `ffmpeg` to create opus encoded audio appropriate for use with
tool that wraps `FFmpeg to create opus encoded audio appropriately for use with
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appropriate is correct. It's modifying audio, not create. It's an adjective, not an adverb.

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appropriate is correct. It's modifying audio, not create. It's an adjective, not an adverb.
I ran this through my head a couple of times, but you're definitely correct here. Good catch 👍

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## Contributing
Contributions are very welcomed, however please follow the below guidelines.
Contributions are very welcomed, however, please follow the below guidelines.
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Re-wording this sentence completely might be an option, but as it stands, the comma doesn't belong here. "however" is modifying the latter half of the sentence, not the former.

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Oh, nice catch again Carson. You're correct about the comma. I looked over this sentence rather quickly but I should have double-checked it.

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additional voice helper functions and features for DiscordGo.

* See [dca](https://github.com/bwmarrin/dca) for an **experimental** stand alone
tool that wraps `ffmpeg` to create opus encoded audio appropriate for use with
tool that wraps `FFmpeg to create opus encoded audio appropriately for use with
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It seems like you dropped the closing code tick here.

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Good catch.

@@ -52,8 +44,8 @@ for your editor — they are hugely helpful when developing Go code.

# Install DiscordGo

Like any other Go package the fist step is to `go get` the package. This will
always pull the latest tagged release from the master branch. Then run
Like any other Go package, the first step is to `go get the package. This will
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It again seems like you dropped the closing code tick.

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Good catch.

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JCorcho commented Jul 29, 2021

The commit message is misspelled, too. 😛

haha, good catch! appreciate the thorough review, definitely wouldn't want to add any new issues c: I went ahead and revised the issues you pointed out in the latest commit.

Best Regards,
JC

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Hi. Sorry review took a long time.

Overall PR looks good to me. But since this PR corrects not only grammar, but also spacing, I think it would be fair to fix all double spaces the docs have.

Also, please note the conflicts.

recommend you walk though [A Tour of Go](https://tour.golang.org/welcome/1) to
help get your familiar with the Go language. Also checkout the relevent Go plugin
for your editor — they are hugely helpful when developing Go code.
You must already have a working Go environment set up to use DiscordGo. If you are new to Go and have not yet installed and tested it on your computer then please visit [this page](https://golang.org/doc/install) first then I highly
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You must already have a working Go environment set up to use DiscordGo. If you are new to Go and have not yet installed and tested it on your computer then please visit [this page](https://golang.org/doc/install) first then I highly
You must already have a working Go environment set up to use DiscordGo. If you are new to Go and have not yet installed and tested it on your computer then please visit [this page](https://golang.org/doc/install) first, then I highly

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This example uses bot tokens for authentication only. While email/password is
supported by DiscordGo, it is not recommended to use them.
supported by DiscordGo, their use is not recommended.
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DiscordGo dropped all user account endpoints, I think would be better to remove this line.

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