Added Simon Chu's Critique Post #3
Open
Conversation
This file contains bidirectional Unicode text that may be interpreted or compiled differently than what appears below. To review, open the file in an editor that reveals hidden Unicode characters.
Learn more about bidirectional Unicode characters
bvasiles
requested changes
Mar 15, 2021
|
|
||
| # Overview of Study Design and Methods | ||
|
|
||
| The study uses quasi-experiments to perform the study on two classes of subjects, a group of synthetic networks, and emergency management systems (EMS) -- a large-scale industry system. |
There was a problem hiding this comment.
What makes this a quasi-experiment? Can you be more specific?
|
|
||
| None of the research in optimizing configuration for multiple criteria addressed the online (dynamic-reconfiguring) SDN, instead, most of them addressed offline, and in the domain of system design or architecture. | ||
|
|
||
| ## Hook |
There was a problem hiding this comment.
The hook is more about articulating why filling the gap is important. Your text reads more like "gap" (what is unknown given the existing literature) than "hook" (why is filling said gap important). Take a look again at the Lingard readings listed here.
Sign up for free
to join this conversation on GitHub.
Already have an account?
Sign in to comment
Add this suggestion to a batch that can be applied as a single commit.
This suggestion is invalid because no changes were made to the code.
Suggestions cannot be applied while the pull request is closed.
Suggestions cannot be applied while viewing a subset of changes.
Only one suggestion per line can be applied in a batch.
Add this suggestion to a batch that can be applied as a single commit.
Applying suggestions on deleted lines is not supported.
You must change the existing code in this line in order to create a valid suggestion.
Outdated suggestions cannot be applied.
This suggestion has been applied or marked resolved.
Suggestions cannot be applied from pending reviews.
Suggestions cannot be applied on multi-line comments.
Suggestions cannot be applied while the pull request is queued to merge.
Suggestion cannot be applied right now. Please check back later.
This is Simon's critiques of the paper
Dynamic Adaptation of Software-defined Networks for IoT Systems: A Search-based Approach. Thanks!