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Grammar fixes.
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kencausey authored and robertoaloi committed Apr 8, 2017
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Expand Up @@ -54,7 +54,7 @@ xref:P-ERTS[] of this book you will get a deep understanding of
how the runtime system works.

In the following chapters of xref:P-ERTS[] I will try to explain each
component of the system by itself, in one separate chapter for each of
component of the system by itself, in a separate chapter for each of
the major component. You should be able to read any one of these
chapters without having a full understanding of how the other
components are implemented, but you will need a basic understanding of
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In xref:the_erts_stack[] you can see the ERTS Stack illustrated with
two Erlang nodes running on one machine.

In the bottom of the stack there is the hardware you are running
At the bottom of the stack there is the hardware you are running
on. The easiest way to improve the performance of your app is probably
to run it on better hardware. If economical or physical constraints
won't let you upgrade your hardware you can start exploring higher
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VxWorks, Solaris, and Mac OS X. Today most of the development of ERTS
is done on Linux and OS X, and you can expect the best performance on
these platforms. However, Ericsson have been using Solaris internally
in many projects and ERTS have been tuned for Solaris for many years.
Depending on your use case you might actually get best performance on
in many projects and ERTS has been tuned for Solaris for many years.
Depending on your use case you might actually get better performance on
a Solaris system. The OS choice is usually not based on performance
requirements, but is restricted by other demands. If you are building
an embedded application you might be restricted to Raspbian or VxWorks,
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