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A fact from Operation Tarnegol appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the Did you know column on 14 January 2011 (check views). The text of the entry was as follows:

Did you know... that Operation Tarnegol, in which an Israeli Meteor NF.13 (pictured) shot down an Egyptian Ilyushin Il-14 transport, was only made public 32 years after the event?

A record of the entry may be seen at Wikipedia:Recent additions/2011/January.

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Unclear phrasing

Was this the last ariel victory by a meteor anywhere or just an IAF meteor? Either way it should be made clearer. Unfortunately I don't have the requisite knowledge and a few minutes on google isn't conclusive. Egg Centric (talk) 23:53, 14 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]

The exact line says "last for the IAF's Gloster Meteors.", so it's Israel's last Meteor kill. Might have been the last Meteor kill anywhere, but my sources didn't say that. Poliocretes (talk) 10:15, 15 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for clarification. It still seems unclear to me but unfortunately I can't really think of an alternative phrasing that isn't clumbsy or long winded, so guess we'll stick with this! Egg Centric (talk) 11:05, 15 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Is this ok? It's a shame to do because the article is beautifully written but I'm hoping this flows just as well. Egg Centric (talk) 16:07, 15 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Does this count as an airliner shootdown incident?

Your vote at Talk:List_of_airliner_shootdown_incidents would be appreciated :) Egg Centric (talk) 12:06, 6 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]