Is Your Creepypasta oc A Mary...

By spookyspacegay

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I will tell what I think makes a creepypasta oc a mary sue, I will also review your character More

Looks
Ships
first oc review!!
Personality
OC review #2
Names and Cloths
FANFICS!!
3rd oc review
OC REVIEW
hello
kaia the proxy
Back from the dead
Willow Alec
Self promo
Your character's looks (rewrite)

Colours and Cloths

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By spookyspacegay

Where do I start umm... DON'T MAKE HER LOOK LIKE A HOE! Like rlly does she/he have to look like that?! She/He is a killer not a hoe. Get it got it good. So let me give you examples of cloths gone wrong
1. Don't make it so you see her panties or boobs
2. She don't need no high heels like how she gonna run to heels
3. Crop tops are not a good choice like she could get slashed in the stomach and that wouldn't feel nice try to cover up. OK now cloths gone right
1.her boobs are covered up and you can't see her panties or out line of her crotch
2. She wears shoes that she can run in.
3.her shirt covers her up
OK colours: NO NEON COLOURS I have seen too many ocs that have neon colours not even in this Fandom. How are they gonna sneak pass ppl if you can direct traffic with your cloths like rlly bruh. Try to make it darker colours like I'm not saying ONLY USE BLACK YOU WASTE OF OXYGEN! No I'm NOT saying that use as in like a darker shade of yellow so just don't make the colours too bright. Well let's all I can think of bye for now :3 ~bloodyartist

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